Describe a historical place. What is the place? Where is it located? What is the historical meaning

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I wish to share with you about a historical place in Korea.

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It is a Gyeongbokgung where were Korea royal families lived in the past.

>>> It is called Gyeongbokgung. It\'s a palace where  Korean royal families used to live in the past or during the dynasties.
 The palace is located in seoul and quite historically meaningful place.

>>>  The palace is located in Seoul and it has quite a historically meaningful place.

When japanese occupation, last queen of joseon dynasty was killed by Japanese swordsmans in the place.

>>> During the Japanese occupation, the last queen of the Joseon dynasty was killed by Japanese swordsmen in that palace.

At that time, the historical palace was demolished, however it was rehabilitated after emancipation.
>>> Then it was demolished.  Luckily, however it was rehabilitated after much emancipation. 
The place is much more beautiful than before, also it become one of the popular place in Korea.

>>> The place is much more beautiful than before. Also, it became one of the popular places to visit in Korea.

Especially, in spring, many people usually visit there, and spend a time borrowing korean traditional clothes and also taking lots of pictures.

>>> Especially in spring, many people usually visit there. They can also borrow Korean traditional clothes for picture taking.

Because of sad story, people try to commemorate as well as enjoy.
>>> Because of its sad history, people  commemorate it\'s importance as well as enjoy its beauty.
Because I have not been the palace, I would like to go with my friend this year.

>>>  I have never been in the palace so I would like to go there this year with my friend.

I am expecting to see the Gyeongbokgung.

>>> Correct.

Furthermore, I am also exciting to wear korean traditional clothes which is called hanbok after a long interval.

>>> Furthermore, I am also excited to wear the Korean traditional clothes called Hanbok after a long time.