Describe a meal you enjoyed at a restaurant.
학생이 쓴 원문
I love Sushi with fresh salmon,tuna,on top at the restaurant.
The sushi is made with vinegar,salt,sugar of seasoned rice
and then sliced raw fish ,salmon,tuna,shrimp,clam and squid on top.
The sushi on the plate stimulate appetite for me.
I have never made sushi at home.
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I love Sushi with fresh salmon,tuna,on top at the restaurant.
>> I love sushi with fresh salmon and tuna on top at restaurants.
The sushi is made with vinegar,salt,sugar of seasoned rice
The sushi is made with vinegar,salt,sugar of seasoned rice
>> Sushi is made with seasoned rice mixed with vinegar, salt, and sugar.
and then sliced raw fish ,salmon,tuna,shrimp,clam and squid on top.
and then sliced raw fish ,salmon,tuna,shrimp,clam and squid on top.
>> It is then topped with sliced raw fish such as salmon, tuna, shrimp, clam, and squid.
The sushi on the plate stimulate appetite for me.
The sushi on the plate stimulate appetite for me.
>> The sushi on the plate stimulates my appetite.
I have never made sushi at home.
I have never made sushi at home.
>> Correct
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