Describe a moment when you felt truly proud of yourself. What did you accomplish, and why was it mea

2024-09-11 · 첨삭 강사 Ryka

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I was proud of the memory of failing the exam several times but eventually pas[이름]g. It was meaningful because it was a necessary qualification.

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Hi! I\'m so pleased you took the time to complete the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

I was proud of the memory of failing the exam several times but eventually pas[이름]g. 
>> 
I was proud of the memory of failing the exam several times but eventually pas[이름]g it.
OR >> I took pride in the experience of failing the exam multiple times but ultimately pas[이름]g it.

It was meaningful because it was a necessary qualification.
>> CORRECT
OR >> 
It held significance because it was an essential qualification.

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