Describe a natural disaster that happened in your country.
학생이 쓴 원문
In Korea, there are several typhoons in the summer..
They destroy houses,buildings,crops,nature and even kill people.
Last year,lightening and heavy rain caused significant damage to natural environment.
Fortunately,they disappeared this year without any damage.
강사 첨삭
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~~ Teacher Sharon
In Korea, there are several typhoons in the summer.
>> Correct
They destroy houses,buildings,crops,nature and even kill people.
>> They destroy houses, buildings, crops, nature and can even kill people.
Last year,lightening and heavy rain caused significant damage to natural environment.
Last year,lightening and heavy rain caused significant damage to natural environment.
>> Last year, lightning and heavy rain caused significant damage to the natural environment.
Fortunately,they disappeared this year without any damage.
Fortunately,they disappeared this year without any damage.
>> Fortunately, they disappeared this year without causing any damage.
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