Describe a painting or artwork that you like.
학생이 쓴 원문
I like Claude Mont\'s painting especially\" Water Lilies\"
He was one of the impressionist painters.
He painted pictures based on nature such as water, clouds,
trees,sky ,water lilies and landscapes.
His drawing focused on the nature and the light.
His artworks always make me feel at ease.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
Good job on using your words to paint a picture.
You did really well in expressing yourself.
Keep it up!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I like Claude Mont\'s painting especially\" Water Lilies\"
>> I like Claude Monet’s paintings, especially \" Water Lilies.\"
He was one of the impressionist painters.
He was one of the impressionist painters.
>> He was one of the Impressionist painters.
He painted pictures based on nature such as water, clouds, trees, sky, water lilies and landscapes.
He painted pictures based on nature such as water, clouds, trees, sky, water lilies and landscapes.
>> Correct
His drawing focused on the nature and the light.
His drawing focused on the nature and the light.
>> His paintings focused on nature and light.
His artworks always make me feel at ease.
His artworks always make me feel at ease.
>> Correct
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