Describe a park or a garden you like to visit.
학생이 쓴 원문
There are several parks nearby.
One of them, the walking track in Namyang Mary\'s Shrine is the best for me.
Whenever I visit there ,I meet beautiful flowers,trees, birds,and sacred items.
They welcome me feel relaxing.
I am comforted by them.
강사 첨삭
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There are several parks nearby.>> Correct
One of them, the walking track in Namyang Mary\'s Shrine is the best for me.
One of them, the walking track in Namyang Mary\'s Shrine is the best for me.
>> One of them, the walking track in Namyang Mary\'s Shrine, is the best for me.
Whenever I visit there ,I meet beautiful flowers,trees, birds,and sacred items.
Whenever I visit there ,I meet beautiful flowers,trees, birds,and sacred items.
>> Whenever I visit there, I see beautiful flowers, trees, birds, and sacred items.
They welcome me feel relaxing.
They welcome me feel relaxing.
>> They make me feel relaxed.
I am comforted by them.
I am comforted by them.
>> Correct
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