Describe a perfect date. Answer in 5 to 10 sentences

2019-02-12 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

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Perfect date... It\'s a very interesting topic. ;) For me, the most perfect date should be with the one who I love most. With him or her, normal daily life become special. But if we want more delightful day with the one who we love, than we should visit some special places. When we change the place, we feel differently and new. And also we can feel refreshingly special about our partner and we can newly find their personality trait. In other words, we can know each other more. My dream date is visiting foreign country with lover. It must be the most special trip. Appetizing dishes are also prerequisite of perfect date. According to an science article, with wonderful meal, people can easily have delightful feeling.

강사 첨삭

Hi Su ^^


Perfect date... It\'s a very interesting topic. ;)

>>> correct


 For me, the most perfect date should be with the one who I love most.

>>> correct


 With him or her, normal daily life become special.

>>> With him or her, normal daily life becomes special.


 But if we want more delightful day with the one who we love, than we should visit some special places.

>>> But, if we want a more delightful day with the one we love, then we should visit some special places.


 When we change the place, we feel differently and new.

>>> correct


 And also we can feel refreshingly special about our partner and we can newly find their personality trait.

>>> correct


 In other words, we can know each other more.

>>> In other words, we will know each other more.


 My dream date is visiting foreign country with lover. It must be the most special trip.

>>> My dream date is visiting foreign countries with my lover. It must be the most special trip.


 Appetizing dishes are also prerequisite of perfect date.

>>> Appetizing dishes are also prerequisite to a perfect date.


 According to an science article, with wonderful meal, people can easily have delightful feeling.

>>> According to a science article, with a wonderful meal, people can easily have delightful feeling.


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