Describe a perfect date. Answer in 5 to 10 sentences
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Perfect date... It\'s a very interesting topic. ;)
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For me, the most perfect date should be with the one who I love most.
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With him or her, normal daily life become special.
>>> With him or her, normal daily life becomes special.
But if we want more delightful day with the one who we love, than we should visit some special places.
>>> But, if we want a more delightful day with the one we love, then we should visit some special places.
When we change the place, we feel differently and new.
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And also we can feel refreshingly special about our partner and we can newly find their personality trait.
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In other words, we can know each other more.
>>> In other words, we will know each other more.
My dream date is visiting foreign country with lover. It must be the most special trip.
>>> My dream date is visiting foreign countries with my lover. It must be the most special trip.
Appetizing dishes are also prerequisite of perfect date.
>>> Appetizing dishes are also prerequisite to a perfect date.
According to an science article, with wonderful meal, people can easily have delightful feeling.
>>> According to a science article, with a wonderful meal, people can easily have delightful feeling.
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