Describe a perfect day for you. Answer in 3 to 5 sentences

2019-02-19 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

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Meeting congenial friends are prerequisite of a perfect day for me. Making conversation and communicate with others is a very importent and essential part of my life. Concentrating on my work or hobby is meaningful and delightful. We should live our own life, as it could be the last day of ours. We don\'t need to take into account our problem too much seriously, but we just let them go and take it easy.

강사 첨삭

Hi Su ^^


Happy Tuesday :)

Thank you for your efforts! I appreciate you :)


T. Lainey <\",)))><


Meeting congenial friends are prerequisite of a perfect day for me.

>>> correct


 Making conversation and communicate with others is a very importent and essential part of my life.

>>> Making conversation and communicating with others is very important and is an essential part of my life.


 Concentrating on my work or hobby is meaningful and delightful.

>>> correct


 We should live our own life, as it could be the last day of ours.

>>> correct


 We don\'t need to take into account our problem too much seriously, but we just let them go and take it easy.

>>> correct

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