Describe a person who has had a major influence on you.
학생이 쓴 원문
My father is the person who had a great influence on me.
He was one year old when his father and brother passed away.
He grew up well with his mother in a difficult situation.
He became a great my father and I lost him in 2000.
he was diligent,frugal,committed, strict and devoted to my family.
He might seem to live his life without regrets.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
Thank you for ending the week right.
Review all the lessons for this week.
Ask any questions you have in class.
I can say that your writing skills are definitely getting better so keep practicing.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
My father is the person who had a great influence on me.>> My father was the person who had great influence on me.
He was one year old when his father and brother passed away.
>> Correct
He grew up well with his mother in a difficult situation.
He grew up well with his mother in a difficult situation.
>> He grew up well with his mother even in a difficult situation.
He became a great my father and I lost him in 2000.
He became a great my father and I lost him in 2000.
>> He became a great father and I lost him in 2000.
he was diligent,frugal,committed, strict and devoted to my family.
he was diligent,frugal,committed, strict and devoted to my family.
>> He was diligent, frugal, committed, strict and devoted to my family.
He might seem to live his life without regrets.
He might seem to live his life without regrets.
>> It seemed that he lived his life without regrets
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