Describe a person you admire.
학생이 쓴 원문
I really admire people who are the volunteers. I can\'t separate both of my duties and service. But, even they can volunteer although working too. I don\'t believe in my cases, after getting off from work, I tend to lie on my bed. Also, I can\'t spend my time for other people too because I wan to get compensate something like taking a rest, hanging out with my friends.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday, Elic! You are interested in learning, listens attentively, and makes a solid effort to avoid distractions that could interrupt the learning process. You show responsibility and follows directions whenever they are given. Keep up the good work.
I really admire people who are the volunteers.
>>> I really admire the people who are volunteers.
I can\'t separate both of my duties and service.
>>> I can\'t separate both my duties and my service.
But, even they can volunteer although working too.
>>> But even they can volunteer, although they are working too.
I don\'t believe in my cases, after getting off from work, I tend to lie on my bed.
>>> I don\'t believe in my cases; after getting off work, I tend to lie on my bed.
Also, I can\'t spend my time for other people too because I wan to get compensate something like taking a rest, hanging out with my friends.
>>> Also, I can\'t spend my time with other people because I want to get compensated for something like taking a rest or hanging out with my friends.
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