Describe a personal achievement you are proud of.
학생이 쓴 원문
Have a nice evening. The test that I told you last class is very hard for me . so I need to pray for god.
I achieved the the proud of the teacher. Last year I taught the middle school students about science at the academy. I feel very tired and worried during the first month. Before the middle test, one student told that It is the first time to study the science for himself. At first I do not understand what that means. Other teacher told me that he does not study well and dose not like every subject. But he always study hard in my class. So I very proud that I change the student!
After the middle test I taught every student confidently.
강사 첨삭
Hello Diane! It was nice of you to have exerted effort in answering our homework despite the fact that you were preparing for your English test. Thank you! I\'m hoping to hear that you\'re happy with the test. :)
~T.IRENE~
Have a nice evening.
>> Correct.
The test that I told you last class is very hard for me. so I need to pray for god.
>> The test that I told you about in the class is very hard for me so I need to pray to God.
OR>> The test that I told you last class was very hard for me so I needed to pray to God.
I achieved the the proud of the teacher.
>> I achieved the score that made my teacher proud.
Last year, I taught the middle school students about science at the academy.
>> Last year, I taught the middle school students about science in the academy.
OR>> Last year, I taught the middle school students about science at Winston Academy.
I feel very tired and worried during the first month.
>> I felt very tired and worried during the first month.
Before the middle test, one student told that It is the first time to study the science for himself.
>> Before the middle term test, one student told me that it was his first time to study science by himself.
At first I do not understand what that means.
>> At first, I did not understand what he meant by that.
Other teacher told me that he does not study well and dose not like every subject.
>> Other teachers told me that he does not study well and doesn\'t like every subject.
But he always study hard in my class.
>> But he always studied hard in my class.
So I very proud that I change the student!
>> So I was very proud that I changed the student!
After the middle test I taught every student confidently.
>> After the middle test, I taught all the students with more confidence.
~T.IRENE~
Have a nice evening.
>> Correct.
The test that I told you last class is very hard for me. so I need to pray for god.
>> The test that I told you about in the class is very hard for me so I need to pray to God.
OR>> The test that I told you last class was very hard for me so I needed to pray to God.
I achieved the the proud of the teacher.
>> I achieved the score that made my teacher proud.
Last year, I taught the middle school students about science at the academy.
>> Last year, I taught the middle school students about science in the academy.
OR>> Last year, I taught the middle school students about science at Winston Academy.
I feel very tired and worried during the first month.
>> I felt very tired and worried during the first month.
Before the middle test, one student told that It is the first time to study the science for himself.
>> Before the middle term test, one student told me that it was his first time to study science by himself.
At first I do not understand what that means.
>> At first, I did not understand what he meant by that.
Other teacher told me that he does not study well and dose not like every subject.
>> Other teachers told me that he does not study well and doesn\'t like every subject.
But he always study hard in my class.
>> But he always studied hard in my class.
So I very proud that I change the student!
>> So I was very proud that I changed the student!
After the middle test I taught every student confidently.
>> After the middle test, I taught all the students with more confidence.
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