Describe a picturesque place in at least five sentences that you want me to visit.
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to recommend to you that you would visit Spirit Island in Cannada. I visited there last summer with my wife and daughter, and it is one of the unforgettable places that I have visited during my temporary living in the US.
It is a small island with tall trees which have leaves like needles. It is located on the beautiful Malign lake which commands a subreal scenery. A bird flies slightly above the lake and a herd of mooses are hanging around the lake.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름]!
Your composition created a picturesque island in my mind!
Now I\'m dying to go to this place.
I will definitely go there in one of these days. But first, I need to drop by Korea. It sure is much closer to my country.
Are you planning to go back there someday? I guess you want to show the beauty of this place to your son as well when he gets older.
I \"googled\" it and I saw tons of pictures, which are all captivating.
We do have pine trees here in Baguio City but the pine trees in Spirit Island sure look much greener and livelier.
How about these in Korea, which place do you think is picturesque?
You may answer all of my questions tomorrow, if you don\'t mind.
I do have loads of questions for you [이름].
If you have some for me, just tell me. I would be more than willing to answer them the best way I can.
So [이름], I will catch you again tomorrow.
Have a cool afternoon!
_Klein
I want to recommend to you that you would visit Spirit Island in Cannada.
>>I want to recommend that you visit Spirit Island in Canada.
I visited there last summer with my wife and daughter, and it is one of the unforgettable places that I have visited during my temporary living in the US. >>I visited that place last summer with my wife and my daughter, and it is one of the unforgettable places that I have visited during my temporary stay in the US.It is a small island with tall trees which have leaves like needles.
>>Correct
OR >> It is a small island with tall pine trees.
It is located on the beautiful Malign lake which commands a subreal scenery.
>>Correct!
OR >> It is located on the beautiful Maligne Lake, which commands a surreal scenery.
A bird flies slightly above the lake and a herd of mooses are hanging around the lake.
>>Correct [herd of moose]
OR >> Birds fly just above the lake and an herd of moose hang around the lake.
>> Flocks of bird dash through the lake and an herd of moose hang around it.
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