Describe a piece of advice you recently received.
학생이 쓴 원문
Recently, I received some advice from my mom. She says, \"you shouldn\'t guess badly that how do people think about you becaues It makes you feel hopeless.\" after I had a quarrel with my sister. My sister didn\'t talk about me directly but I can feel ill from she\'s behavior and accent. so I just thought about \'she doesn\'t like me\' and than I spoke candidly to my mom about that. Mom says \"It\'s just your guessing, don\'t do that\' so I accepted she\'s advice and than I can settle a conflict with my sister.
강사 첨삭
Hey Sarah! I\'m glad you were able to tell me about an advice you received recently from your mom. I hope you and your sister wouldn\'t argue that much anymore. Keep it up with the writing tasks. Looking forward to the next one ^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
Recently, I received some advice from my mom.
>> CORRECT.
She says, \"you shouldn\'t guess badly that how do people think about you becaues It makes you feel hopeless.\"
>>She said, \"You shouldn\'t think about how people think about you because it can make you feel hopeless.\"
after I had a quarrel with my sister.
>> After I had an argument with my sister.
My sister didn\'t talk about me directly but I can feel ill from she\'s behavior and accent.
>> I didn\'t hear my sister talk bad about me directly but I felt like she did basing from her behavior and tone.
so I just thought about \'she doesn\'t like me\' and than I spoke candidly to my mom about that.
>> So, I thought she just doesn\'t like me and spoke with my mom candidly about it.
Mom says \"It\'s just your guessing, don\'t do that\' so I accepted she\'s advice and than I can settle a conflict with my sister.
>> My mom said, \"Don\'t overthink about simple things.\" I accepted her advice and settled the conflict between my sister and I.
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