Describe a place that filled you with awe.
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, I don\'t think I\'ve been to a place that filled me with awe yet.
But if you asked me to describe a place that filled me with awe among the places I\'ve been to, I would say the emerald sea I saw on my family trip to Guam.
When it comes to awe, it might feel a little grand, but if I explain it easily, it would be comfortable to think of it as a place where I saw and admired.
The emerald sea seen in Guam was really pretty in dark color, but what was most interesting was that the pretty sky blue sea and the dark blue sea were separated by lines. It was also that it didn\'t cross that dividing line and it didn\'t mis colors. I think it was amazing because I\'ve seen such a landscape before.
강사 첨삭
Hi!
I really like your answer. Thank you for expressing your thoughts about the place that filled you with awe.
You did well, and I also did some corrections. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
Well, I don\'t think I\'ve been to a place that filled me with awe yet.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I haven’t visited a place that left me in awe yet.
But if you asked me to describe a place that filled me with awe among the places I\'ve been to, I would say the emerald sea I saw on my family trip to Guam.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: If I had to pick an awe-inspiring place I’ve visited, it would be the emerald sea in Guam.
When it comes to awe, it might feel a little grand, but if I explain it easily, it would be comfortable to think of it as a place where I saw and admired.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: The word ‘awe’ might sound a bit grand, but simply put, it’s a place I saw and truly admired.
The emerald sea seen in Guam was really pretty in dark color, but what was most interesting was that the pretty sky blue sea and the dark blue sea were separated by lines.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: The emerald sea in Guam was beautifully dark, but what fascinated me most was how the light sky-blue sea and the dark blue sea were clearly separated by lines.
It was also that it didn\'t cross that dividing line and it didn\'t mis colors.
>> The two colors stayed separate and didn’t mix across the line.
I think it was amazing because I\'ve seen such a landscape before.
>> “I think it was amazing because I had never seen such a landscape before.
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