Describe a place that is special to you in not less than 5 sentences.

Dangjin is very meaningful place to me. This is mainly because I fulfilled my national military service at here. I went to Dangjin 6 months after I was discharged from military. The journey was retrospective in many ways. I could think of the hardships that I had gone before. Anyway, Dangjin evokes a variety of emotions. I think that Dangjin will not be out of my mind and is very special place to me.

Hello there, Sung Hoon.   What a meaningful essay! Great job! I have no other things to say. All you need is to polish your grammar. The structure of your sentences are indeed commendable. You have the ability to construct simple as well as complex sentences.   I\'ll see you then later in our class. Bye.   ~~T. Jamie^^   Dangjin is very meaningful place to me. >> Dangjin is a very meaningful place to me. This is mainly because I fulfilled my national military service at here. >> This is mainly because I fulfilled my national military service there. I went to Dangjin 6 months after I was discharged from military. >> I visited Dangjin 6 months after I was discharged from the military. The journey was retrospective in many ways. >> CORRECTI could think of the hardships that I had gone before. >> I could remember the hardships that I had encountered before. OR: >> The place reminded me of the hardships that I had encountered before.Anyway, Dangjin evokes a variety of emotions.>> CORRECT I think that Dangjin will not be out of my mind and is very special place to me. >> I think that Dangjin will not be out of my mind and will remain a very special place to me.