Describe a place that you would like to visit.
학생이 쓴 원문
The Santander strand line in Spain is my best place in my life.
I studied abroad at the Spain. At first I was very nervous and lonely so I just walked the sea line in front of my home. while I walked and feel the sea, I forgot the every worried things. when I felt depressed I walked the sea line. It was so beautiful landscape but I had to see alone. whenever I see that I always thought my family and friends. So one of my bucket list is to visit the Santander with my family! To dream come true , I need to live all my best.
강사 첨삭
Hello Diane! How\'s it going?! Thank you for taking the time to write about the homework. I appreciate it. :)
~T. IRENE~
The Santander strand line in Spain is my best place in my life.
>> The Santander strand line in Spain is the best place I have ever visited in my life.
I studied abroad at the Spain.
>> I studied in Spain.
At first I was very nervous and lonely so I just walked the sea line in front of my home.
>> At first, I was very nervous and lonely so I just walked along the sea line in front of my home.
while I walked and feel the sea, I forgot the every worried things.
>> While walking and feeling the sea atmosphere, I forgot all my worries.
when I felt depressed I walked the sea line.
>> Whenever I feel depressed, I just walk along the sea side.
It was so beautiful landscape but I had to see alone.
>> It has a beautiful landscape. Sadly, I had to watch it alone.
whenever I see that I always thought my family and friends.
>> Whenever I am there, i think about my family and friends back in Korea.
So one of my bucket list is to visit the Santander with my family!
>> So nowadays, one of the things in my bucket list is to visit the Santander with my family!
To dream come true , I need to live all my best.
>> To make my dream come true, I have to give or do my best in life.
~T. IRENE~
The Santander strand line in Spain is my best place in my life.
>> The Santander strand line in Spain is the best place I have ever visited in my life.
I studied abroad at the Spain.
>> I studied in Spain.
At first I was very nervous and lonely so I just walked the sea line in front of my home.
>> At first, I was very nervous and lonely so I just walked along the sea line in front of my home.
while I walked and feel the sea, I forgot the every worried things.
>> While walking and feeling the sea atmosphere, I forgot all my worries.
when I felt depressed I walked the sea line.
>> Whenever I feel depressed, I just walk along the sea side.
It was so beautiful landscape but I had to see alone.
>> It has a beautiful landscape. Sadly, I had to watch it alone.
whenever I see that I always thought my family and friends.
>> Whenever I am there, i think about my family and friends back in Korea.
So one of my bucket list is to visit the Santander with my family!
>> So nowadays, one of the things in my bucket list is to visit the Santander with my family!
To dream come true , I need to live all my best.
>> To make my dream come true, I have to give or do my best in life.
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