Describe a place you find peaceful and why it\'s special to you.
학생이 쓴 원문
I thank it\'s peaceful to be at home.
The reason is that I like to stay home alone quietly.
강사 첨삭
Hi Conan!
There are new grammar rules that we need to learn during our next class.
Review this composition and prepare for it.
Thank you for your hard work.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I thank it\'s peaceful to be at home.
>> I think it\'s peaceful to be at home.
The reason is that I like to stay home alone quietly.
The reason is that I like to stay home alone quietly.
>> The reason is that I like to quietly stay home alone.
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