Describe a place you will never forget.
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Hello, [이름]!
Oh, thank you so much for doing your homework.
I really appreciate it! Wow! Everland is an amusement park,
am I right? Have you been to Lotte World?
I\'ve heard Lotte World is such a wonderful place!
Anyway, let\'s talk about this tomorrow, okay?
Again, thank you so much! Have an awesome Tuesday night, Sweetie!
~Teacher May ^^
I will never forget the Everland.
>> I will never forget Everland.
>>OR: I will never forget the amusement park named, Everland.
>>OR: The place that I will never forget is the amusement park named, Everland.
Because the Everland has many interesting ride, and
I have a lot of memory in the Everland.
>> Because Everland has many interesting rides, and I have a lot of good memories in Everland.
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