: Describe a song that you like.
학생이 쓴 원문
The title of the song is Forgotten Season and the singer is Lee Yong.
It was very popular when I was in twenty\'s.
I used to listen to this song at work with colleagues.
The lyric and emotion are touching me.
So It reminds of my [이름] days.
Every October, many people still sing this song .
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
This is an improvement over your other compositions.
Thank you for always making the effort.
The organization of your sentences and the patterns are clearer this time.
Keep it up!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
The title of the song is Forgotten Season and the singer is Lee Yong.>> Correct
It was very popular when I was in twenty\'s.
It was very popular when I was in twenty\'s.
>> It was very popular when I was in my twenties.
I used to listen to this song at work with colleagues.
I used to listen to this song at work with colleagues.
>> I used to listen to this song at work with my colleagues.
The lyric and emotion are touching me.
The lyric and emotion are touching me.
>> The lyrics and emotions are touching for me.
So It reminds of my [이름] days.
So It reminds of my [이름] days.
>> So it reminds of my [이름] days.
Every October, many people still sing this song .
Every October, many people still sing this song .
>> Correct
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