Describe a successful person.

2015-01-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hi Jessie~ You asked me why i study english. Um.. Remember we met first if I talk to you? Of course, Each person's motivation is different. But in my case I want to talk with another people like you. I mean a foreigner. The world is so wide to live in Korea only. haha. Someday I will travel around the world.:-D Anyway to speak a homework, I think the person who say confidently "I'm happy and satisfy." is a successful person. Because All of us want to success in order to be happy. How about you? I'm very curious about you. How you think, maybe not, You are my first foreign friend! XD Strongly today~

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]! Thanks for once again having the time to send a composition. Ohh! I remember. ^_^ I really hope that you can travel around the world so you can visit me. ^_^ I\'m looking forward to that. I totally agree with what you said. A succesful person is someone who is happy with what he/she has/has achieved. It\'s not about the money or possessions but it\'s about happiness. Well, we better continue talking tomorrow. See you! ~T. Jessie~ Hi Jessie~ >> Correct!You asked me why i study english. >> You asked me why I am studying English. Um.. Remember we met first if I talk to you? >> Remember when we first met? Of course, Each person\'s motivation is different. >> Of course, each person\'s motivation is different. But in my case I want to talk with another people like you. >> But in my case I want to talk with other people like you. I mean a foreigner. >> Correct! The world is so wide to live in Korea only. haha. >> Correct! Someday I will travel around the world.:-D>> Correct!Anyway to speak a homework, I think the person who say confidently \"I\'m happy and satisfy.\" is a successful person. >> Anyway, let\'s talk about the homework.  I think a person who can confidently say, \"I\'m happy and satisfied.\" is a successful person. Because All of us want to success in order to be happy. >> Because all of us want to be successful in order to be happy. How about you? >> Correct! I\'m very curious about you. >> Correct! How you think, maybe not, You are my first foreign friend! XD >> What do you think?  You are my first foreign friend! XD Strongly today~ >> Do you mean: I\'m getting stronger today.

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