Describe a successful small business that you know about.
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The small business I know about is the restaurant which I visited once. The restaurant has only one table. When I had the meal there, our group was only guests, so the chef who is the owner of the restaurant served us what we ordered before. It made us feel like staying in my own kitchen of my house. We were not interrupted by others during mealtime, and we could focus on ourselves and food. The restaurant is located inside the housing complex and remotely from downtown, so it is not easy to find the shop if there is no advertisement. We also knew it from the person who visited there before, otherwise people can know it through the review on SNS. However, we can stay there for only two hours and then there is the maxim and minimum number of guests to reserve a table. The experience was unique and interesting and we are comfortable. That’s why people would like to visit the restaurant. I recommended it for special occasion such as anniversaries, proposals or birthday, etc.
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The small business I know about is the restaurant which I visited once.
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The restaurant has only one table.
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When I had the meal there, our group was only guests, so the chef who is the owner of the restaurant served us what we ordered before.
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It made us feel like staying in my own kitchen of my house.
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We were not interrupted by others during mealtime, and we could focus on ourselves and food.
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The restaurant is located inside the housing complex and remotely from downtown, so it is not easy to find the shop if there is no advertisement.
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>>>OR: The restaurant is located in the housing complex and remotely from downtown, so it is not easy to find the shop if there is no advertisement.
We also knew it from the person who visited there before, otherwise people can know it through the review on SNS.
>>>We also knew it from the person who visited there before, otherwise people can know it through the review on SNS.
However, we can stay there for only two hours and then there is the maxim and minimum number of guests to reserve a table.
>>>> However, we can stay there for only two hours and then there is the maximum and the minimum number of guests to reserve a table.
The experience was unique and interesting and we are comfortable.
>>> The experience was unique, interesting and we are comfortable.
That’s why people would like to visit the restaurant.
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I recommended it for special occasion such as anniversaries, proposals or birthday, etc.
>>>>I recommended it for special occasions such as anniversaries, proposals or birthdays, etc.
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