Describe a sunset to someone who cannot see it.
학생이 쓴 원문
Everyday we can see a sunrise and a sunset in everywhere. The sun raises from east and sets to west. In the beach and high mountain sunset is very beautiful, It looks like round-flame that color is red.
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Everyday we can see a sunrise and a sunset in everywhere.
>>Every day we can see a sunrise and a sunset everywhere.
The sun raises from east and sets to west.
>>The sun rises from the east and sets to the west.
In the beach and high mountain sunset is very beautiful,
>>On the beach and high mountains, the sunset is very beautiful,
It looks like round-flame that color is red.
>> It looks like a round flame whose color is red.
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