Describe a time when you helped someone or asked someone for help.what happened? How did you feel?
학생이 쓴 원문
I helped my friends because my friend ready to the school president election.
So I\'m a help my friends.
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your corrected composition, Jimmy. Please take a look at the corrections below.
Cheers,
Jean~~
Describe a time when you helped someone or asked someone for help.what happened? How did you feel?
I helped my friends because my friend ready to the school president election.
So I\'m a help my friends.
>>> I helped my friends because one of them was preparing to run for school president.
>>> OR: My friend was preparing to run for school president, so I offered my help.
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