Describe a time when you made a mistake.
학생이 쓴 원문
I was absent from my power English class lately without procedure.
Actually,I arrived home and I wanted to rest for a moment.
However, I was in a deep sleep and I didn\'t hear the alarm.
That was totally my mistakes.
I also want to say I am sorry to you.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
I\'m just glad you\'re back.
Tell me everything that happened.
I hope you\'re okay.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I was absent from my power English class lately without procedure.
>> I was absent from my Power English class recently without following the proper procedure.
Actually,I arrived home and I wanted to rest for a moment.
Actually,I arrived home and I wanted to rest for a moment.
>> Actually, when I arrived home, I wanted to rest for a moment.
However, I was in a deep sleep and I didn\'t hear the alarm.
However, I was in a deep sleep and I didn\'t hear the alarm.
>> However, I fell into a deep sleep and didn’t hear the alarm.
That was totally my mistakes.
That was totally my mistakes.
>> That was completely my mistake.
I also want to say I am sorry to you.
I also want to say I am sorry to you.
>> I also want to say that I am very sorry.
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