Describe a time when you were stuck in traffic.
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was on a trip on the weekend, I was always stuck in traffic .
The cars were standing in a long line, and moving very slowly,like the turtles.
There were many different kind of cars on the road.
I was bored and sleepy.
So, I turned on the music loudly to wake up.
강사 첨삭
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When I was on a trip on the weekend, I was always stuck in traffic .>> When I was on a trip over the weekend, I was always stuck in traffic.
The cars were standing in a long line, and moving very slowly,like the turtles.
The cars were standing in a long line, and moving very slowly,like the turtles.
>> The cars were lined up for a long distance and moving very slowly, like turtles.
There were many different kind of cars on the road.
There were many different kind of cars on the road.
>> There were many different kinds of cars on the road.
I was bored and sleepy.
I was bored and sleepy.
>> Correct
So, I turned on the music loudly to wake up.
So, I turned on the music loudly to wake up.
>> So, I turned on the music loudly to wake myself up.
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