Describe a typical bedroom of a Korean student your age.
학생이 쓴 원문
Describe typical bedroom 9f Korean student is dirty because they are eat a lot of snacks in bedroom end they are the clothes on the bed.
강사 첨삭
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Describe a typical bedroom of a Korean student your age.
Describe typical bedroom 9f Korean student is dirty because they are eat a lot of snacks in bedroom end they are the clothes on the bed.
>> A typical bedroom of a Korean student is dirty because students eat a lot of snacks in the bedroom and their clothes are on the bed.
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