Describe a typical family in your country.
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In the Philippines, there are ome married couples who still live with their parents.
In my case, my father lives with us. Sometimes, I don\'t feel comfortable.
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In the past, there were great families in Korea.
>> CORRECT
there are many families live with their grandparents.
>> Many families live with their grandparents.
OR >> There are many families who live with their grandparents.
These days, we are parents work and their children are busy.
>> These days, parents work and children are busy.
Chirdren must go to many academies.
>> CHILDREN must go to many academies.
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