Describe a typical family unit and the importance of family in your country.
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4 members of family is most common in Korea. I think the attention of family is very important because people who received a lot of family attention and love are more sociable and have higher self-esteem.
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Hello, Ms. [Name]! Thank you for sharing. In my country, extended families are usually common but I think, nowadays, couples choose to spend more time together than have children.
-T. Sonny
4 members of family is most common in Korea. >>Nuclear family is the most common family type in Korea.
I think the attention of family is very important because people who received a lot of family attention and love are more sociable and have higher self-esteem.
>>Correct!
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