Describe a website that you use regularly
학생이 쓴 원문
I am going to talk about a website I use regularly. It is ‘Naver’. This is a portal site and it is one of the most popular sites in Korea. I guess when almost of Korean need to search for something they want, they may use Naver.
I downloaded the app of this website, and I use it almost every day to search for news, current affair and sports.
About 15 years ago, I watched an advertisement of Naver through TV, and an very famous celebrity advertised it. After that, Naver was well known to everybody including me.
Naver has a very useful function. That is a blog which people can write down about information. For example, when I bought a new ipad and I didn’t know how to use it. I searched for ipad on Naver Blog, I could get the answers right now. That is why I use Naver very often.
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I am going to talk about a website I use regularly. It is ‘Naver’. This is a portal site and it is one of the most popular sites in Korea. I guess when almost of Korean need to search for something they want, they may use Naver.
I downloaded the app of this website, and I use it almost every day to search for news, current affair and sports.
About 15 years ago, I watched an advertisement of Naver through TV, and an very famous celebrity advertised it. After that, Naver was well known to everybody including me.
Naver has a very useful function. That is a blog which people can write down about information. For example, when I bought a new ipad and I didn’t know how to use it. I searched for ipad on Naver Blog, I could get the answers right now. That is why I use Naver very often.
I downloaded the app of this website, and I use it almost every day to search for news, current affair and sports.
About 15 years ago, I watched an advertisement of Naver through TV, and an very famous celebrity advertised it. After that, Naver was well known to everybody including me.
Naver has a very useful function. That is a blog which people can write down about information. For example, when I bought a new ipad and I didn’t know how to use it. I searched for ipad on Naver Blog, I could get the answers right now. That is why I use Naver very often.
>> I am going to talk about \"Naver\" which I use regularly. This is a portal site and is one of the most popular websites in South Korea. I guess most Koreans use this website to search whatever they want to know. I downloaded the application for this website and I use it almost everyday to search for the latest news and sports. Naver became a well known website to everybody including me after an advertisement 15 years ago by a famous celebrity. Naver has a very useful blog which people can write down any information. For example, when I bought a new Ipad and I didn\'t know how to use it. I searched it on Naver Blog and I got the answers right away. This is one of the reasons why I use Naver often.
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