Describe a wolf.
학생이 쓴 원문
Wolf has gray fur.
And it also has bitter eyes.
It eats animals like deer, sheep, and it lives in forest.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kara!
It eats animals like deer, sheep, and it lives in forest.
Your answer is actually quite surprising.
You literally described the wolf\'s appearance.
There was nothing wrong with that, but I would like you to think outside the box too. :)
Always remember that you can also describe something figuratively.
Andrea
Wolf has gray fur. And it also has bitter eyes.
>> Wolf has a gray fur and bitter eyes.
It eats animals like deer, sheep, and it lives in forest.
>> It is a carnivore, so it eats other kinds of animals.
>> It also leaves in a forest.
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