Describe an important gift you have, tell us why it is important.
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My favorite gift of mine is \"feeling less pain than someone else in a same painful state\" and \"being almost never ill\". When I was 6 or 7, I punctured my own finger with a stapler accidentally. Little droplets of blood was trickling down the two holes. But when most people might have screamed in pain and might have been jumping, clutching their finger... I didn\'t. I didn\'t even feel pain, and I wasn\'t stunned too, I was like, \"Oh! I got hurt again. OK, just pull it out and clean it. It\'ll be ok.\" And I didn\'t panick! I just pulled it out normally, not even calmly neither panicking, and cleaned the two holes. And that\'s it! And i was born uside-down and even a month early, but I didn\'t need an incubator! I was perfectly healthy. And untill now, I\'ve never went to and emergeny-treatment-room too. I almost never got ill, nor have a broken bone. no deep cuts either! I felt this was my best gift. And I still adore it~ (✿◕‿◕✿)
강사 첨삭
Good day, Heather! I agree that being healthy is the greatest gift we can receive. Stay grateful and be happy. We will talk more in class. I will see you. Have an amazing day! ~T. Lyn
My favorite gift of mine is \"feeling less pain than someone else in a same painful state\" and \"being almost never ill\".
>>My favorite gifts are \"feeling less pain than others in the same painful condition\" and \"rarely getting sick.\"
When I was 6 or 7, I punctured my own finger with a stapler accidentally.
>>Correct.
Little droplets of blood was trickling down the two holes.
>>Small drops of blood flowed down the two holes.
But when most people might have screamed in pain and might have been jumping, clutching their finger...
>>But most people would have screamed in pain and jumped up with clenched fingers.
I didn\'t.
>>But I didn\'t.
I didn\'t even feel pain, and I wasn\'t stunned too, I was like, \"Oh! I got hurt again.
>>I didn\'t feel any pain, I didn\'t pass out, and I was like, \"Oh, I\'m hurt again.\"
OK, just pull it out and clean it.
>>Ok, I just took it out and cleaned my wound.
It\'ll be ok.\"
>>Correct.
And I didn\'t panick!
>>I also didn\'t even panic.
I just pulled it out normally, not even calmly neither panicking, and cleaned the two holes.
>>Neither calm nor panicked, I took it out and normally cleaned the two holes.
And that\'s it!
>>Correct.
And i was born uside-down and even a month early, but I didn\'t need an incubator!
>>And I was born upside-down and even a month early, but I didn\'t need an incubator!
I was perfectly healthy.
>>Correct.
And untill now, I\'ve never went to and emergeny-treatment-room too.
>>And I\'ve never been to the emergency room until now.
I almost never got ill, nor have a broken bone.
>>I have rarely been sick or broken a bone.
no deep cuts either!
>>No deep cuts or wounds either.
I felt this was my best gift.
>>Correct.
And I still adore it~
>>And I still adore and love it.
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