Describe an interesting historic place

2013-06-14 · 첨삭 강사 Tina

학생이 쓴 원문

What it is where it is located what you can see there now and explain why this place is interesting

강사 첨삭

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What it is

>>What it is?
where it is located

>>Where is it located?
what you can see there now

>>What can you see there now?

or

>>What can be seen there?
and explain why this place is interesting

>>And explain why this place is interesting.

 

 

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