Describe an old friend that you got in touch with again. How did you get in contact?

2024-08-28 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I haved touch with my friend again because of my dad my dad had my friend\'s phone number so I haved touch by with my dad phone.

강사 첨삭

Hi Sunny!
Great job today!
I love how things are progressing.
I hope you will be consistent in your work.
Keep it up!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I haved touch with my friend again because of my dad my dad had my friend\'s phone number so I haved touch by with my dad phone.
>> I got in touch with my friend again by using my dad\'s phone because he has the number I needed to call. 

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