Describe any hobbies you have, sports you participate in, or other activities you regularly enjoy in

2015-10-20 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

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Actually, I don’t have any activities participate in regularly regarding on sports. But I play badminton sometimes with my boyfriend on weekend. I think maybe I am not good at doing sports. Except playing badminton, I go to bookstore regularly. Nearby my house, there has a shopping mall near my house. I would like to go to the shopping mall, as on the 2nd floor, there has a bookstore. I am a regular customer of the bookstore. Reading books can not only enhance your knowledge but also differentiate from others.

강사 첨삭

Good Evening [이름]! Thank you again for writing something about our topic! I appreciate your effort in answering your homework. You have given correct thoughts about the topic itself! :) See you later!   Teacher Carmen ^^   Actually, I don’t have any activities participate in regularly regarding on sports. >>Actually, I don\'t participate in any activity regarding sports regularly.   But I play badminton sometimes with my boyfriend on weekend. >> But I play badminton with my boyfriend on the weekend sometimes.   I think maybe I am not good at doing sports. >> I think maybe I\'m not that good in sports. Except playing badminton, I go to bookstore regularly. >> Except for playing badminton, I like going to the bookstore regularly.   Nearby my house, there has a shopping mall near my house. >> There is a shopping mall nearby my house.   I would like to go to the shopping mall, as on the 2nd floor, there has a bookstore. >> I would like to go to the second floor of the shopping mall where the bookstore is located.   I am a regular customer of the bookstore. >> Correct!   Reading books can not only enhance your knowledge but also differentiate from others. >> Reading books can not only enhance your knowledge but also it differentiate us from other people.

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