Describe any hobbies you have, sports you participate in, or other activities you regularly enjoy in
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Actually, I don’t have any activities participate in regularly regarding on sports. But I play badminton sometimes with my boyfriend on weekend. I think maybe I am not good at doing sports.
Except playing badminton, I go to bookstore regularly. Nearby my house, there has a shopping mall near my house. I would like to go to the shopping mall, as on the 2nd floor, there has a bookstore. I am a regular customer of the bookstore. Reading books can not only enhance your knowledge but also differentiate from others.
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Actually, I don’t have any activities participate in regularly regarding on sports.
>>Actually, I don\'t participate in any activity regarding sports regularly.
But I play badminton sometimes with my boyfriend on weekend.
>> But I play badminton with my boyfriend on the weekend sometimes.
I think maybe I am not good at doing sports.
>> I think maybe I\'m not that good in sports.
Except playing badminton, I go to bookstore regularly.
>> Except for playing badminton, I like going to the bookstore regularly.
Nearby my house, there has a shopping mall near my house.
>> There is a shopping mall nearby my house.
I would like to go to the shopping mall, as on the 2nd floor, there has a bookstore.
>> I would like to go to the second floor of the shopping mall where the bookstore is located.
I am a regular customer of the bookstore.
>> Correct!
Reading books can not only enhance your knowledge but also differentiate from others.
>> Reading books can not only enhance your knowledge but also it differentiate us from other people.
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