Describe as a parent.

2020-06-25 · 첨삭 강사 Gabby

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Hi Gabby. You don\'t give homework to me, please.^.^ Let me see. I am a parent. The present, I don\'t care of children. They are adult. I usually cook for them and washing laundry. Now, they care of me. They went to hospital with me and give pocket money too. I am good by get pocket money them. Of course, the money give back at account them. My husband is doing economic yet. Anyway, I don\'t know what it is parents. I always think I am like children. Be funny. Why my [이름]d is not adult ! You teach me the reason. Bye bye Gabby!

강사 첨삭

Hi Suzan. You are an awesome mother! :)

- T. Gabby

Hi Gabby.
>> Correct.
You don\'t give homework to me, please.^.^

>> Don\'t give homework to me, please.
Let me see. I am a parent.

>> Let me try. I am a parent. They are adult.
The present, I don\'t care of children.

>> Presently, I don\'t care of my children anymore because they are grown-ups now.

I usually cook for them and washing laundry.

>> I usually cook for them and do their laundry.
Now, they care of me.

>> Now they take care of me.

They went to hospital with me and give pocket money too.

>> They went to the hospital with me and gave me money too.
I am good by get pocket money them.

>> I keep my pocket money well.

Of course, the money give back at account them.

>> I gave back some money.
My husband is doing economic yet.

>> My husband is doing economic.
Anyway, I don\'t know what it is parents.

>> Anyway, I don\'t know what it\'s like to be a parent.
I always think I am like children.

>> I always think that I\'m a kid.

Be funny.

>> Correct.
Why my [이름]d is not adult !

>> Why my [이름]d is not yet matured.

You teach me the reason.

>> Teach me the reason.
Bye bye Gabby!

>> Correct.

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