Describe how you have demonstrated leadership ability both in and out of school/Work.

2017-04-27 · 첨삭 강사 Travis

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I think that the good leadership is to be confident and would be leading people just in case team or company have a big deal. I also assume that most of the good supervisors have a good leadership and they prefer dedicating team members and coworkers rather than the work for own achievement. They used to sincerely give helpful advices for people whether it is good on side or not about problems including work and private things. Most of all the character of people who have a good reputation is to have a good relationship with underlings. It is important for me not to force suggesting alcohol at work party. Of course it would be great if they won’t force to go work party randomly. Simply I consider to have some points and I’m satisfied as long as they are not too selfish and permit my day off.

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I think that the good leadership is to be confident and would be leading people just in case team or company have a big deal.
>>I think that a good leadership is have a confidence and would be leading people just in case the team or a company have a big problem.
I also assume that most of the good supervisors have a good leadership and they prefer dedicating team members and coworkers rather than the work for own achievement.
>>I also assumed that most of the supervisors have a good leadership and they prefer to dedicate a team members or coworkers rather than the work for their own achievement.
They used to sincerely give helpful advices for people whether it is good on side or not about problems including work and private things.
>>They\'ve been giving sincere advices for people whether it\'s good on one side or not about problems including work and private things.
Most of all the character of people who have a good reputation is to have a good relationship with underlings.
>>Most of all the characteristic of a person who have a good reputation is to have a good relationship with underlings.
It is important for me not to force suggesting alcohol at work party.
>>It is important for me not to drink alcohol on a work party.
Of course it would be great if they won’t force to go work party randomly.
>>Correct.
Simply I consider to have some points and I’m satisfied as long as they are not too selfish and permit my day off.

>>Correct.

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