Describe how you have demonstrated leadership ability both in and out of school
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To be honest I was born having characteristic which is introverted.
>>Correct.
>>OR: To be honest I\'m introvert when I was born.
I used to worried about what must have happened or not, although that is so the trivial thing that everyone doesn\'t care about it.
>>I was worrying about what must have happened or not, although that is so the trivial thing that everyone doesn\'t care about.
So I pretend to be a energetic person while get along with around people.
>>So I pretend to be a lively person while a get along with people.
I also can demonstrated leadership ability on my way just in case nobody doesn’t stand up for some opinions.
>>I can also demonstrate leadership ability on my way just in case nobody doesn’t stand up for some opinions.
When I meet with my best friends and stay with familiar people who know me I can do everything what I want.
>>When I meet my best friends and stay with familiar people who knows me that I can do everything what I want.
Especially I used to be a team leader of the game in recreation and they believe in me to get scores to win the prize.
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These are ordinary things to find out easily in our life but I have been thinking that it makes me much stronger if those are gained to lots of experiences.
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>>OR: These are the ordinary things to find out easily in our life but I\'ve been thinking that it makes more stronger if those are gained to lots of experiences.
Therefore I have determined to act even trivial things so that it will be helpful for my confidence and leadership ability.
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