Describe korean
학생이 쓴 원문
we learned that our history began at least 5000years ago in school.
Historians are proud of is what our history has long time traditional and culture..
anyway the korea has been having what it is old and new together.
There are 4 seasons in korea.
Spring is a warm.
this season is better to go outside for work out.
summer is too hot. so many peoples go to the sea in summer.
fall is changed leaves color from green to red. if you see the sight, you will not want to go to your country.
winter is too cold.but many peoples go skiing to mountain.
but i have never been there.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]. Thanks for sharing.
-T. Gabby :)
We learned that our history began at least 5000years ago in school.
>> We learned in school that our history began 5000 years ago.
Historians are proud of is what our history has long time traditional and culture.
>> Historians are proud of our history and it\'s traditions and culture.
anyway the korea has been having what it is old and new together.
>> Anyway, Korea has it\'s old and new.
There are 4 seasons in korea.
There are 4 seasons in korea.
>> There are 4 seasons in Korea.
Spring is a warm.
Spring is a warm.
>> Spring is warm.
this season is better to go outside for work out.
this season is better to go outside for work out.
>> This is the season where it\'s better to go outside and work out.
summer is too hot. so many peoples go to the sea in summer.
summer is too hot. so many peoples go to the sea in summer.
>> Summer is too hot that\'s why many people go to the sea.
fall is changed leaves color from green to red. if you see the sight, you will not want to go to your country.
fall is changed leaves color from green to red. if you see the sight, you will not want to go to your country.
>> Fall is when leaves change it\'s color from green to red.
if you see the sight, you will not want to go to your country.
>> When you see the sight, you will not want to go back to your country.
winter is too cold.but many peoples go skiing to mountain.
>> Winter is too cold but many people still go to the mountain to ski.
but i have never been there.
but i have never been there.
>> Correct.
Thank you.
Thank you.
>> Correct.
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