describe my best friend
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Her name is Cassie and she is 4 years younger than me.
Even though we have a quite age gap, we are connecting on every level.
The day I have meet her at first was 7 years ago. Cassie was a my share mate, Kyle’s girlfriend and Kyle introduced her to me.
The first impression of Cassie was kind and friendly toward all people including me.
I spend my most time with her sharing many private stories, and I enjoy special days together such as Christmas day, new years and birthdays.
She made me start playing tennis, and we attended a tennis lesson. As a result, we were able to enter a tennis social club together.
I meet her almost twice a week by participating the club and enjoying dinner.
The most thankful thing with her is that she gives me opportunities to meet many different kinds of people. She is a well-known person as a nail artist. That is why she has a lot of friends and acquaintances, and that things influence me to make many friends as well.
She is the friend who sta
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Hi Miss. [Name]!
I hope you\'re having a good day.
I\'ll see you tonight!
~~ Teacher Mia ~~
Her name is Cassie and she is 4 years younger than me.
Even though we have a quite age gap, we are connecting on every level.
The day I have meet her at first was 7 years ago. Cassie was a my share mate, Kyle’s girlfriend and Kyle introduced her to me.
The first impression of Cassie was kind and friendly toward all people including me.
I spend my most time with her sharing many private stories, and I enjoy special days together such as Christmas day, new years and birthdays.
She made me start playing tennis, and we attended a tennis lesson. As a result, we were able to enter a tennis social club together.
I meet her almost twice a week by participating the club and enjoying dinner.
The most thankful thing with her is that she gives me opportunities to meet many different kinds of people. She is a well-known person as a nail artist. That is why she has a lot of friends and acquaintances, and that things influence me to make many friends as well.
She is the friend who sta
>> My best friend\'s name is Cassie and she is four years younger than me. Even though we have a 4-year age gap, we still like many things in common or similarities. One of my friends named Kyle introduced her to me seven years ago. The first impression I had of her was kind and friendly and it\'s also the same to the people around us. We spent most of our time sharing our private stories, and we enjoyed special days such as Christmas, New Year, and birthdays together. I meet her almost twice a week when we participate to our tennis lessons and to have dinner. I\'m very thankful to her because I met different kinds of people since she is a well-known nail artist. She has a lot of acquaintances and friends, and her character influenced me to be friendly as well. She is the friend who stayed with me all through these years.
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