Describe my future self!
학생이 쓴 원문
If I describe my future self, I will be a happy university student.
I will go to the school, study hard, go to part time jobs and travel somewhere with my friends.
I want to describe my future self that a person I live happy as I want something.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Jenna! I really appreciate for your time and effort in making your composition. It\'s good to hear that you are always happy and you describe your future self as a happy person. We will talk more about this in class. I will see you then.~ T. Lyn
If I describe my future self, I will be a happy university student.
>>If I describe and express myself in the future, I will become a happy university student.
I will go to the school, study hard, go to part time jobs and travel somewhere with my friends.
I will go to the school, study hard, go to part time jobs and travel somewhere with my friends.
>>I will go to school, study hard, work part-time and travel with friends.
I want to describe my future self that a person I live happy as I want something.
I want to describe my future self that a person I live happy as I want something.
>>I want to live as happy as I want to be.
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