Describe season You like
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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The season I like is spring. Spring is following winter and preceding summer. In this season, cold weather turns to warm and fresh.
Due to good weather which means it is not too cold and not too hot, most of schools go to a school picnic with their school mates, and they have photos taken for their school year book.
Also, in Korea, people enjoy a mountain climbing in spring. A mountain climbing is my favorite hobbit. I can breath fresh air on top of the mountain and am able to see colorful flowers.
It is quite short time in spring, just 1 or 2 months, so I try to spend my free time on enjoying good weather by doing something.
That is why I like spring among other seasons.
I am going to talk about the season that I like.
The season that I like the most is spring. Spring comes after winter and precedes summer. In this season, the cold weather turns warm and fresh.
Because the weather is good, which means it is not too cold and not too hot, most schools have picnics. The photos taken are used in their year book.
Also, in Korea, people enjoy mountain climbing activities during the spring season. Mountain climbing is my favorite hobby. Up on the mountain, I can breath fresh air and I am able to see colorful flowers.
Spring lasts just for 1 to 2 months, so I try to spend my free time enjoying good weather by doing something.
These are the reasons why I like spring among other seasons.
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