Describe some good news you have recently received?
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'ve lately heard about good news that the government declared a face mask which is not necessary anymore on the public transportation. It\'s been a while [이름]ce I wasn\'t with a face mask. So, it feels like I can enjoy the sense of freedom. Especially, people should take a mask even it\'s very super duper hot summer.
강사 첨삭
Dear [Name], never give up in life. Aim for success and overcome the failures. With your hard work and determination anything is possible. I am always here for you.
I\'ve lately heard about good news that the government declared a face mask which is not necessary anymore on the public transportation
>>> I\'ve lately heard about the good news that the government has declared that a face mask is not necessary anymore on public transportation.
It\'s been a while [이름]ce I wasn\'t with a face mask.
>>> It\'s been a while [이름]ce I wasn\'t wearing a face mask.
So, it feels like I can enjoy the sense of freedom.
>>> So, it feels like I can enjoy the sense of freedom.
Especially, people should take a mask even it\'s very super duper hot summer.
>>> Especially, people should take off a mask even it\'s very super duper hot on summer.
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