Describe someone you respect deeply
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
I was pretty busy last Friday and Monday.
I had a dinner with my customer and I took part in funeral of my wife\'s relative person.
I respect my father. My father had no chance to take a learning in School. When he was child, there was very poor time in Korea. So he worked for money everyday.
He said there was no someting to eat in his house.
His house made by mixed solid too. It was like a bad warehouse.
But he did not give up his hope. He worked hard to be rich. Now He was a millionaire. I had the high quality education thanks to my father.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
I had a dinner with my customer and I took part in funeral of my wife\'s relative person.
I respect my father.
He said there was no someting to eat in his house.
His house made by mixed solid too. It was like a bad warehouse.
But he did not give up his hope.
I appreciate your effort in writing a composition.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
Dear [Name],
I was pretty busy last Friday and Monday.
I was pretty busy last Friday and Monday.
>> CORRECT!
I had a dinner with my customer and I took part in funeral of my wife\'s relative person.
>> I had dinner with my customer and I took part in the funeral of my wife\'s relative.
I respect my father.
>> CORRECT!
My father had no chance to take a learning in School.
>> My father had no chance to study in a school.
When he was child, there was very poor time in Korea.
>> They were very poor when he was a child.
So he worked for money everyday.
>> So, he worked every day to earn money.
He said there was no someting to eat in his house.
>> He said there was nothing to eat in his house.
His house made by mixed solid too. It was like a bad warehouse.
>> His house was made of mixed solid too. It was like a bad warehouse.
But he did not give up his hope.
>> But he did not give up with his hopes.
He worked hard to be rich.
>> CORRECT!
Now He was a millionaire.
>> Now, he is already a millionaire.
I had the high quality education thanks to my father.
>> I had the high of quality education thanks to my father.
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