Describe something I could never give away

this is my first homework from my teacher Risa. It was hardly to found out sth i could never give away becasuse i uaually do not think that topic on my normal days. if I must choose one, it is defeated by someone. it became almost my habit, and it caused by supercompetitive Korean socity. there is so many people in Koera and that people lives in competition everyday. that's a situstion of mordan Korean socity now. also, i am the type who hates loosing. i hate loosing more than anyone when i was young. so i fought many times beacause of my personalty.

Thank you so mcuh for sending your homework! Such an obedient student I have here, I like that! Please see the corrections of the sentences below. See you tomorrow.   Cheers, [이름]   this is my first homework from my teacher Risa. >>This is my first homework from my teacher, Risa. It was hardly to found out sth i could never give away becasuse i uaually do not think that topic on my normal days. >>It is difficult to think of what I coud never give away because I don\'t think of that topic on my normal days. if I must choose one, it is defeated by someone. >>If I must choose one, it is being defeated by someone. >>If I muct choose one, it is being over competitive. it became almost my habit, and it caused by supercompetitive Korean socity. >>It became almost a habit. This attitude is evident in the Korean society. there is so many people in Koera and that people lives in competition everyday. >>There are so many people in Korea who live in competition. that\'s a situstion of mordan Korean socity now. also, i am the type who hates loosing. >>That\'s the situation of the modern society now. Also, I am the type who hates losing. i hate loosing more than anyone when i was young. >>I hate to lose especially when I was young. so i fought many times beacause of my personalty. >>So I fought may times with people because of that personality.