Describe something you could never give away.
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I think it\'s a really difficult question.
The first thing seems to be health.
There is an old Korean saying that if you lose your health, you lose everything.
It seems that health comes first because people can do anything only when they are healthy.
The second is happiness.
These days, there are more mentally ill people than sick people.
I also feel depressed sometimes these days, and I think it is important to heal and find happiness by doing small but happy things.
The last is goal.
Goal is also important because it is easy for a person to wander if they don\'t have a goal, and only if they have a goal, they act as a driving force in life while making efforts
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Hello, [이름]!
I was impressed with your answers. I must say that those really matter as we grow old and are something hard to lose. Woah! You did great :))
-Chammy
I think it\'s a really difficult question.The first thing seems to be health.
There is an old Korean saying that if you lose your health, you lose everything.
It seems that health comes first because people can do anything only when they are healthy.
The second is happiness.
These days, there are more mentally ill people than sick people.
I also feel depressed sometimes these days, and I think it is important to heal and find happiness by doing small but happy things.
>>Correct
The last is goal.
Goal is also important because it is easy for a person to wander if they don\'t have a goal, and only if they have a goal, they act as a driving force in life while making efforts
The last is goal.
Goal is also important because it is easy for a person to wander if they don\'t have a goal, and only if they have a goal, they act as a driving force in life while making efforts
>> The last is the goal.
The goal is also important because it is easy for a person to wander if they don\'t have a goal, and only if they have a goal, they act as a driving force in life while making efforts파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.