Describe the atmosphere of your city or town in the morning.
학생이 쓴 원문
My town atmosphere is very cold in the morning.
And My town is many people\'s live in the town, so very kind people\'s in the my town.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jimmy!
This is your third and last revised composition from last week\'s homework. You can see the corrected version below.
Cheers,
Jean~~
Describe the atmosphere of your city or town in the morning.
My town atmosphere is very cold in the morning.
>>> Mornings in my town are very cold.
And My town is many people\'s live in the town, so very kind people\'s in the my town.
>>> There are many people living in my town, and they are all kind.
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