Describe the best party that you have been to. Why was it the best?

2021-02-22 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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I had the experience to visit a party from my Mexican friend for celebrating a happy new year. that is the first time which has a different type from Korea. there was a lot of Mexican homemade food on the dining table, I could get food as much as I want. they played music and welcome everyone, so I could make new friends. and we celebrated the coming happy new year. that was the funniest party that I ever gotten

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Kevin!~

That\'s so cool!

I think Mexican food is so delicious and their culture is so colorful, so I think you truly had a good time. ^^

~t. Ally

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>> I had an experience to visit a party from my Mexican friend to celebrate the new year. That is the first time I went to a party that was quite different from Korea. There were a lot of Mexican homemade food on the dining table, so I could get as much food as I want. They played music and welcomed everyone, so I was able to make new friends. That was the most fun party that I ever went to.

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