Describe the closest neighbor you could think of. Mention how often you met and your relationship wi
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oh you know what? i don\'t have any closest neighbor..it because..you know i live in a apartment which is established in city. so i don\'t have a chance to meet others, who\'s live in a same apartment. i mean i don\'t have a opportunity with greet someone. maybe if i have a close neighbor in my apartment it is must be meaningful! because you know it will be so cool if someone welcome me at the same elevator.
i know i have to approach someone to make some congenial neighbor. right.,, i have to try next week.
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Hello Robin!
Thank you for being honest. You have used the vocabulary well. Continue fixing your sentences and learn from your mistakes. Listening to and singing English songs and memorizing some English movie lines could be of great help to know the patterns in English. ^^
~T. Maine
>>Oh, you know what? I don\'t really have any closest neighbors.
it because..you know i live in a apartment which is established in city.
>> It is because as you know, I live in an apartment which is established in a city.
so i don\'t have a chance to meet others, who\'s live in a same apartment. i mean i don\'t have a opportunity with greet someone.
>>So I don\'t have a chance to meet others who live in the same apartment. I mean I don\'t have an opportunity to greet someone.
maybe if i have a close neighbor in my apartment it is must be meaningful! because you know it will be so cool if someone welcome me at the same elevator.
>>Maybe if I have a close neighbor in my apartment, it must have been meaningful. It will be so cool when someone welcomes me in the same elevator.
i know i have to approach someone to make some congenial neighbor.
i know i have to approach someone to make some congenial neighbor.
>>I know I have to approach someone to make some congenial neighbor.
right.,, i have to try next week.
>> I will try meeting my neighbors next week.
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