Describe the decoration of your bedroom.
학생이 쓴 원문
Many doll and Korean fomous writer\'s sign are hanging in my bedroom.
There are many books in my room but I have not finished reading the books.
And a picture draw by my mom is hanging on the wall.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Jimmy!
Here\'s your revised composition fom Monday\'s homework. Thank you for sending it. Please go over the revisions given below, such as avoiding using the same word in the same sentence. See you later!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Describe the decoration of your bedroom.
Many doll and Korean fomous writer\'s sign are hanging in my bedroom.
>> Many dolls and Korean famous writers\' autographs are hanging in my bedroom.
There are many books in my room but I have not finished reading the books.
>> There are many books in my room but I have not finished reading them yet.
And a picture draw by my mom is hanging on the wall.
>> And a picture drawn by my mom is hanging on the wall.
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