Describe the experience of falling in love.
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was younger, I used to make fun and bother. That\'s my how to express the feeling of love and I wanted to talk more with her at that time. After being an adult, when I get fall in love, it\'s similar that. I\'ve been doing it by now, also, I want to take care of her. When she\'s under the weather, I tend to come there with medicine right away. And I already mentioned it before to you.
* Hey Mika!!, I got a hair cut this afternoon. So, you\'re supposed to see that. :)
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday, Elic! You are interested in learning, listens attentively, and makes a solid effort to avoid distractions that could interrupt the learning process. You show responsibility and follows directions whenever they are given. Keep up the good work.
When I was younger, I used to make fun and bother. That\'s my how to express the feeling of love and I wanted to talk more with her at that time.
>>> When I was younger, I used to make fun of and bother people. That\'s how I expressed the feeling of love, and I wanted to talk more with her at that time.
After being an adult, when I get fall in love, it\'s similar that. I\'ve been doing it by now, also, I want to take care of her.
>>> After being an adult, when I fall in love, it\'s similar. I\'ve been doing it by now, and I also want to take care of her.
When she\'s under the weather, I tend to come there with medicine right away.
>>> CORRECT.
And I already mentioned it before to you.
>>> And I already mentioned it to you before.
Hey Mika!!, I got a hair cut this afternoon.
>>> Hey Mika!! I got my hair cut this afternoon.
So, you\'re supposed to see that.
>>> CORRECT.
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